The great palm house ~ challenge
Above is a picture of a glass covered palm house, thechallenge here is to write about a chance encounterwithin the scene.
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A Liaison Come closer, let me see the glimmer in the famed eye.Around your neck, the strand of pearls the lost gigolo purchased?Dull, they do not compare the brilliancethe immaculate shift --The nudge...
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Stiff shoes pinch aging feet,A last grand dame claims a bench,pants from the false sky's heat.Movement across the path,A tiny flower-thief catches her eye.Small hands freeze on the hibiscusAs sudden...
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iit - Reminds me a little of a James Tissot painting, the ocurance in yourpoem is the kind of canvas he would paint. Nicely done.Gemini -A good snapshot, I can imagine the looks that passed between...
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The years have been kind to this place, my dear.~~~~I remember that nightas if it were yesterday~~~~You in your court gownHair piled highHiding your saucy eyesbehind your fan.~~~~Me, all in black,...
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Nicely evocative RG, enjoyed the romantic chance meeting... Matt
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thanks, Matt.RGRead whelmsWrite reamsApplaude ME! {GRIN}
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Thanks Matt,It is reminiscent of a James Tissot painting but I had Casa Blanca in mind when I saw your excellent choice of a picture.It forced me to write of what I know most about, you see?Thank you...
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You're welcome, that's the point of these writing exercises, to spurcreativity. Glad it worked for you Matt
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